Recipe Page Feedback
Person 1 Feedback
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think about other kinds of functionality/context you can provide
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When scrolling down, one of the images has a blurry top and it might seem like there's something wrong with the image before you get to the whole thing - doesn't look quite intentional - maybe crop the image
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like the footer with the source link and the final image
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not super sure of the image of the tofu frying because the lighting is different from the others - find a more well-lit, professional photo
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spacing is clear - legible line height
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increase hierarchy of the headers with the underlines - get rid of the dotted underline and maybe switch to sll caps?
Person 2 Feedback
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fan of the dotted lines under the titles
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Would add a "serve" section at the end that recommends how to plate, or something like "Enjoy" to wrap up the recipe and not end so abruptly
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Credit on the images
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increase sense of hierarchy in the instructions - maybe bold or italicize the numbers? increase distinction and contrast
Plans for Adjustment
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experiment with the underlined titles - will probably keep the Page title with the dotted underline, but change the section headers to be all caps, or distinct in some other way
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make numbers for the "steps" section larger and off to the side - create a sense of progression and hierarchy
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add image credits
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add a "serve" section / sign off
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find more stylistically consistent image of tofu frying