Feedback Notes for Wireframe

Helen Xiu

• Typeface can be a little overwhelming/hard to read - maybe open it up so its not so small and dense
• other typefaces for consideration - Brandon Grotesque at a lighter weight, neutraface, maybe a serif to class it up
• Color palette not very well thought out - try a more limited approach
• is it possible to do the sideswipe page thing? maybe a bit too ambitious
• design the corners - have a consistent aesthetic that is clean and functional
• smaller head image
• consistent margins
• make each page engaging - don't just have a wall of text - try to have images on every "spread"
Notes for myself - add a small static down arrow to indicate scroll down if you decide to do a top-down layout